I have to agree. Up until now (yes I've been keeping track, nice series :) ) has been well designed and made sense. This series of panels is incredibly confusing. I've looked at it multiple times and I can't for the life of me figure out what is happening.
Thanks for the input; this is the kind of criticism I need to know where I need to improve!
I'll see if looking up sample comic pages from experienced authors that are character-action centric (IE: Moving the story forward without dialogue). I need to get the panel/imagery slip-ups turned around.
Nice, very nice. This looks incredibly realistic. I congratulate you on your awsomeness.
P.S. Your reference photo link is broken.
There's spaces automatically put into it that you just need to take out :P
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