philos27g's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bandits to Tor: 029]

I have to agree. Up until now (yes I've been keeping track, nice series :) ) has been well designed and made sense. This series of panels is incredibly confusing. I've looked at it multiple times and I can't for the life of me figure out what is happening.

Tanadrine-Studios responds:

Thanks for the input; this is the kind of criticism I need to know where I need to improve!

I'll see if looking up sample comic pages from experienced authors that are character-action centric (IE: Moving the story forward without dialogue). I need to get the panel/imagery slip-ups turned around.

[Kris' Self Portrait]

Nice.

Nice, very nice. This looks incredibly realistic. I congratulate you on your awsomeness.

P.S. Your reference photo link is broken.

itsKris responds:

There's spaces automatically put into it that you just need to take out :P